The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the 

building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and 

make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram describes the process by which
bricks
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are manufactured and used in the building industry.
Overall
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there are seven processes in the production of
bricks
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starting with the digging of
clay
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and ending with the delivery of
bricks
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.
Initially
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, the
clay
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, which is used as a raw material for the production of
bricks
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, is excavated by a huge digger from the ground and
then
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transferred by lorry to a factory in Homeland. In the next stage, the
clay
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is placed on a metal grid to separate oversized particles from smaller ones, and
subsequently
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, small particles of
clay
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are poured from a metal grid onto the surface of a large roller before mixing with sand and water.
Next,
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the mixture is moulded or cut with the help of a wire cutter to form raw
bricks
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.
In addition
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, raw
bricks
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are placed in a drying oven for about 24–48 hours, during which the water is evaporated.
Further
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dried
bricks
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are heated in two kilns twice at a moderate temperature (200–980 °C) and at a high temperature (830–1300 °C), respectively. In the final stage, the dried
bricks
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are transferred into a cooling chamber, where they are cooled for 2–3 days.
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, the manufactured
bricks
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are packed and distributed to the market in Someland for the purpose of construction.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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