The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram describes the process by which
bricks
are manufactured and used in the building industry.
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Overall
there are seven processes in the production of Linking Words
bricks
starting with the digging of Use synonyms
clay
and ending with the delivery of Use synonyms
bricks
. Use synonyms
Initially
, the Linking Words
clay
, which is used as a raw material for the production of Use synonyms
bricks
, is excavated by a huge digger from the ground and Use synonyms
then
transferred by lorry to a factory in Homeland.
In the next stage, the Linking Words
clay
is placed on a metal grid to separate oversized particles from smaller ones, and Use synonyms
subsequently
, small particles of Linking Words
clay
are poured from a metal grid onto the surface of a large roller before mixing with sand and water. Use synonyms
Next,
the mixture is moulded or cut with the help of a wire cutter to form raw Linking Words
bricks
. Use synonyms
In addition
, raw Linking Words
bricks
are placed in a drying oven for about 24–48 hours, during which the water is evaporated. Use synonyms
Further
dried Linking Words
bricks
are heated in two kilns twice at a moderate temperature (200–980 °C) and at a high temperature (830–1300 °C), respectively. In the final stage, the dried Use synonyms
bricks
are transferred into a cooling chamber, where they are cooled for 2–3 days.
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Finally
, the manufactured Linking Words
bricks
are packed and distributed to the market in Someland for the purpose of construction.Use synonyms
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