The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the 

building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and 

make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram describes the process by which
bricks
are manufactured and used in the building industry.
Overall
there are seven processes in the production of
bricks
starting with the digging of
clay
and ending with the delivery of
bricks
.
Initially
, the
clay
, which is used as a raw material for the production of
bricks
, is excavated by a huge digger from the ground and
then
transferred by lorry to a factory in Homeland. In the next stage, the
clay
is placed on a metal grid to separate oversized particles from smaller ones, and
subsequently
, small particles of
clay
are poured from a metal grid onto the surface of a large roller before mixing with sand and water.
Next,
the mixture is moulded or cut with the help of a wire cutter to form raw
bricks
.
In addition
, raw
bricks
are placed in a drying oven for about 24–48 hours, during which the water is evaporated.
Further
dried
bricks
are heated in two kilns twice at a moderate temperature (200–980 °C) and at a high temperature (830–1300 °C), respectively. In the final stage, the dried
bricks
are transferred into a cooling chamber, where they are cooled for 2–3 days.
Finally
, the manufactured
bricks
are packed and distributed to the market in Someland for the purpose of construction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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