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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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We can see there are two views on buying a large
amount
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number
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 of
toys
 for
children
 to play with from
parents
. And it’s hard to say which is an advantage and disadvantage depending on their own views. Some
parents
 think their
children
 will learn and improve some skills through these
toys
.
For example
, my child is improving her counting skills and can recognize some
colors
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colours
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 and shapes through playing with dominos and number cards.
Besides
, these
toys
 can improve the relationship between family members if
children
 play with their
parents
 and friends if they play with their friends. Other
hand
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, some
parents
 see
this
 as a disadvantage because they think these
toys
 are unsafe for their
children
. In fact, there are many unoriginal
toys
 in the market
besides
 maybe the
children
 are in danger without their parent’s observation.
For example
, the small
colored
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 balls or legos are easy to put in the
children
’s
mouth
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mouths
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 during playing. In short, buying a large
amount
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number
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 of
toys
 for
children
 to play with
to improve
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improves
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 their life skills.
Besides
, there are some disadvantages that we need to know and choose to be suitable and safe for our
children
.
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