The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1984 and 1994.

The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1984 and 1994.
The bar chart and the line graph demonstrate the number of
Japanese
travelling abroad (measured in millions) and Australia’s share of Japan’s
tourists
(measured in percentage) from 1985 to 1995 respectively. Clearly, the
Japanese
tend to travel abroad more and more over the years, which resulted in 1995 being the year with the largest number. Meanwhile, Australia experienced a fluctuation in an upward trend, and 1993 was when they received the most
Japanese
tourists
. As can be seen from the bar chart, the number of
Japanese
tourists
going abroad started out at around 5 million in 1985. From there, it underwent a steady increase and doubled in 1990 with 11 million
tourists
before ending up at approximately 15 million
at the end
of the period. Regarding the line graph, there was a surge in the proportion of
Japanese
travelling to Australia from 2 per
cent
to around 4.8 per
cent
between 1985 and 1988. In the next year,
however
, the country’s share of Japan’s
tourists
went down slightly to roughly 4,1 per
cent
, but
then
rose again and reached a high of more than 6 per
cent
in 1993,
then
stopped at exactly 6 per
cent
in 1994.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas tourists
  • chart analysis
  • data interpretation
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • tourist trends
  • economic factors
  • promotional activities
  • visa policies
  • cultural influences
  • social factors
  • culmination of trends
  • speculation
  • preference shifts
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