You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
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Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to you in reference to an article I read from your yesterday’s newspaper, and I have contrasting opinions about the town
centers
in my Change the spelling
centres
country
compared to the published article in your newspaper.
Despite my opinions, I agree with certain elements written in your article about the similarity of all town
Correct article usage
the town
centers
in my Change the spelling
centres
country
. The increase in environmental pollution is one point that I strongly agree because
cities Change preposition
with because
has
become more and more urbanized in all Change the verb form
have
parts
of the country
. Secondly
the increase in global warming Add a comma
,Secondly
due to
economic development in all parts
of the nation has led to adverse climate changes even though strong regulations are enforced by the government yet industries continue with their expansion road map which has resulted
less rainfall to cities Add the preposition
inresulted
fromresulted
in
the island. Change preposition
on
Finally
rapid Add a comma
,Finally
declining
of educational Replace the word
decline
standard
in every Fix the agreement mistake
standards
town
is another fact that I admit.
However
the city I live in Add a comma
,However
have
a unique culture which has been passed on to Change the verb form
has
use
by our ancestors. We celebrate the traditional Sinhala and Hindu New Year in the month of April but not in other Correct your spelling
us
parts
of the country
. Tourists arriving in our town
have the luxury of enjoying a variety of delicious cuisines, ranging from traditional to modern multi ethnic
food, Add a hyphen
multi-ethnic
whereas
Correct word choice
which
it
is not possible in other Correct pronoun usage
apply
parts
of the country
. As much as our city is popular for food and traditional cultures, the town
is also
locally famous for beautiful scenery as three of the largest waterfalls are situated in our geographical area and creating a home to some of endangered
species but Add an article
the endangered
unfortunately
a lot of tourists are not aware Add a comma
,unfortunately
about
those locations.
Change the preposition
of
Also
I would like to offer you a free guided tour for a week in my Add a comma
,Also
town
so that it will have an impact on your opinion. I look forward to hearing from you, and if you need any further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me as I will be pleased to assist you.
Yours faithfully
Isuru BandaraSubmitted by isuru.cima on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite