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Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. You should include -where you live -explain the problem -what he should do

#landlord #noise #block #flats #-where #-explain #-what
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Dear Usmonov, I'm writing
this
 letter because I really need your help.I have lived in
the
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New York City
since
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 2 years. New York is
the
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 modern city,but my apartment is located in a quiet part of the city.You are the only person who knows me well enough to give me help. The basic problem is the noise of our apartment.During the
last
week
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 there has been an unpleasant drumming sound.
This
 noise is heard from upstairs.Recently a Rocken-Roll band moved there.They are mainly disturbing the sleep of others at night. I actually have a favour to ask you,and I hope you don't mind.In my opinion,we should contact the Centre of Public Rights.Maybe,if you talk to them they will agree to practice the new music in the studio.We would be very happy if you could solve
this
 problem.I hope you will give
this
 matter your urgent consideration. Yours faithfully, Mrs Mariana.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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