You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
This
bar chart illustrates the proportion of
citizens
born in and out of Australia in 1995 and 2010. Those
citizens
live in urban, suburban, and countryside
areas
.
Overall
, in the given time frame, there is a noticeable increase of
citizens
living in cities,
whereas
, the number of
citizens
living in towns and rural
areas
declined substantially. The proportion of
citizens
of cities that were born in Australia grew from about 50% to just over 60%.
While
Australians outside born grew considerably from 60% to 80%.
Moreover
, the amount of born in
citizens
living in towns and rural
areas
has decreased. In 2010, towns and rural
areas
citizens
accounted for around half of the proportion in 1995.
In addition
,
citizens
of cities that born outside Australia were rose rapidly from just over 60% to 80%. Surprisingly, the
citizens
Correct quantifier usage
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of rural
areas
fell dramatically from 40% to nearly less than 10%.
Citizens
of rural
areas
followed a similar pattern. It plummeted slightly from about 10% to less than 10%.
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