You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter Say what the participants liked about the hotel Explain why they were unhappy about the food Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir, I am writing
letter in reference to a recent office conference we had at your
, and to provide feedback about the
and the
, all the participants from our company have enjoyed the stay at your place. They were impressed with the construction of the
without causing harm to the natural habitat.
, the beautiful scenic view in the sky lounge was a highlight among the feedback we had received about your place.
, the hospitality shown by your employees is another factor that was highly appreciated by our staff.
On the other hand
, we have concerns about the
that was available to us. The quality of
in the lunch buffet is not to our expected level, because some
items were not cooked properly.
, a lot of our individuals felt sick on the following day.
, the variety of cuisines that was available on the table is not to the expected standard of a five-star rated
, as a suggestion to the above issue, we would like to suggest the implementation of a proper quality control mechanism on the
, before it is served to the customers, and to have a variety of cuisines. So, that the guests can enjoy your meals. I look forward to hearing from you, and if you need any
information, please do not hesitate to contact me as I will be pleased to supply it. Yours faithfully Isuru Bandara
Submitted by isuru.cima on

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