You want to complain about the service you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting. Write a letter to the person who organized the meeting. In your letter .describe the meeting .explain the problem with the service .suggest what the meeting organizer should do

Dear Mr.Sam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service that I received from the
hotel
, where I stayed for a recent meeting. As you are aware the town hall, which happened the
last
Friday in Mumbai and my stay was at the ABC
hotel
near the airport. I believed, as the
hotel
location is between the airport and the meeting spot, as per your suggestion I decided to reserve a room but that was a mistake I have done. Let me explain the situation I faced during my stay. It was a terrible experience that I had with the service manager.
Firstly
, they provided breakfast and dinner as per the menu but the food quality was extremely awful.
Secondly
, there is no free Wi-Fi, and they included extra charges for an internet connection which disappointed me, and
above all
, the lodge was not really near to the airport and the suggestion was inaccurate. As you are the meeting organizer, I would suggest you henceforth please make sure that the
hotel
rating and feedback and quality of the food and network facilities are available without any charges. I hope you will consider my suggestion and hereafter kindly look for a good servicing
hotel
. Yours sincerely, Jen
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • appreciative
  • constructive criticism
  • in stark contrast
  • subpar
  • unattended requests
  • amenities
  • disruption
  • impede
  • alternative lodging
  • feedback channels
  • hospitality
  • detracted from
  • future endeavors
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