A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Florence, I'm over the moon to hear that you are considering a camping holiday

this

summer. It would be a great adventure seeing that you are always against trying new things. I suggest you visit the Kumayo Calabar camping ground in Uyo state, the people are very friendly and it is very close to town

hence

you can visit other tourist attractions

while

you visit.

Although

it is close to town, it is very far from the airport. I'm sure you would be flying in from Lagos state, be prepared for another 5 hours once you land at the airport.

Additionally

, there is no running water close to the campsite so

therefore

, we need to walk 10 minutes to the entrance to fetch some. I've heard so many beautiful things about the resort and would love to accompany you to fulfil our summer sleepover ritual. We would try different local delicacies, I can't wait to explore

this

adventure with you. Please let me know your dates so I can plan

accordingly

. Lots of love, Ponmile

Submitted by omolefeyikemi on Wed May 24 2023

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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adventure
serenity
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