Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Governments are responsible for the upgrading of countries with different aspects. ,

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governments think that economic evolution is their most crucial mission

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some populations believe that other types of

advance

are equally crucial for a country.

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essay will examine these 2 views and opinions will be examined briefly.

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economic

improvement

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as the most important or crucial expansion because everything in life depends on economic

improvement

. The economy is the biggest factor affecting other

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lifestyles. Economic

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results in the power of buying things when economic expansion is high crowd can live a better life. Because of these ,reasons economic

advance

is considered to be the most important advancement. On the other ,hand some public think that economic developments are not the most important

improvement

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discipline, healthcare, and even society's happiness that can be considered the progress of humanity. These

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think that

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improvement

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is development

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as important as economic

improvement

. For ,example if the health system is not developed by the country diseases can hurt

nation

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badly. In my ,opinion economic developments are not the most important

advance

for a country. I strongly believe that other types of evolution are as important as economic evolution.For ,example discipline is very important because it is affect other types of progress

such

as economic or healthcare developments. If communities are educated well economic advancement is inevitable. In ,conclusion

although

economic growth is very important I think culture is important as an economic

improvement

because literacy affects other's increase.