1.In some countries there are more young people choosing to enroll in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays young

students

are given

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of variety opportunities to start their professional life, they can choose between

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straight to

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university

or

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in

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professional skills. In my

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both decisions are advantageous for the person. First is important to mention that, the decision

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do

apprenticeship

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or apply for

university

depends

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variety

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reasons

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of reasons

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,

such

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personally

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goals, (ii) the professional area that the person decided to

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, most of the time young

students

do not have sure about their intentions of pursue

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field, so

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in vocational training will provide them

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opportunity to

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some knowledge and sure about the profession, (iii) reduce financial burden, as we all know, the

university

fees often the times aren’t cheap, and the scholarships are limited, so some

students

decided to delay the application to

university

in order to

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money.

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the other hand, after a long period of work, probably the employer will not give

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real recognition to the employee because they value people that

also

have a certificate degree and not just

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practical experience,

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which means that one of the advantages can be the less academic recognition and limited theoretical knowledge.

For

this

reason, attending

university

become a must-have in some high-tech fields. In conclusion, young people are able to

gain

the most practical technique during on-the-job training,

although

there would be some challenges for them on the way to promotion at work.

However

, a lot of countries

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present date encourage

students

to

enroll

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in work-based training in summer or winter in order to

gain

a practical technique. In my opinion, from a career point of

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I think that

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professional experience before

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the

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university

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more pros than cons.

Although

, is important to remember that

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decision depends on the circumstances and the

long term

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goal of each

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