you have organised to go on a holiday with your friend. however you must change your plans. write a letter to tell how much you look forward to the plan. why you must change your plans and suggest alternative arrangement.

Dear Annie, I hope
letter finds you well. I am writing
letter to let you know that there is a change of plans for the holiday we planned
month. It’s been almost two years since we couldn’t meet
due to
the ongoing pandemic.
, I am so excited to meet you for our upcoming vacation and I have a bunch of things to share with you about the ups and downs of my life. I am really expecting to spend a refreshing time with you in Singapore soon. Unfortunately,
due to
an urgent situation at my work, I am afraid we will have to adjust our plan a little bit.
is because my manager needs to take an emergency medical leave and I need to back him up for a week.
of flying on 1st June, I suggest we travel a week later. So that we should be able to enjoy our time off with a calm mind. I hope things to be better within that time. Let me know if the plan suits you and I can take care of all the alternatives we decide on. Hoping to hear from you. Lots of love, Ella
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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