you have organised to go on a holiday with your friend. however you must change your plans. write a letter to tell how much you look forward to the plan. why you must change your plans and suggest alternative arrangement.

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Dear Annie, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that there is a change of plans for the holiday we planned

last

month. It’s been almost two years since we couldn’t meet

due to

the ongoing pandemic.

Therefore

, I am so excited to meet you for our upcoming vacation and I have a bunch of things to share with you about the ups and downs of my life. I am really expecting to spend a refreshing time with you in Singapore soon. Unfortunately,

due to

an urgent situation at my work, I am afraid we will have to adjust our plan a little bit.

This

is because my manager needs to take an emergency medical leave and I need to back him up for a week.

Instead

of flying on 1st June, I suggest we travel a week later. So that we should be able to enjoy our time off with a calm mind. I hope things to be better within that time. Let me know if the plan suits you and I can take care of all the alternatives we decide on. Hoping to hear from you. Lots of love, Ella

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

201 words

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you have organised to go on a holiday with your friend. however you must change your plans. write a letter to tell how much you look forward to the plan. why you must change your plans and suggest alternative arrangement.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining.Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Some people thnk that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In many countries, people have health problems because they chose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What are the reasons and solutions?