The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates, so many stores in a nation, that are shut down and newly opened in the period between 2011 and 2018.
it is clear that, at the beginning years to the end. There are ups and down demonstrating.
However, the main fall happened in the middle
According tothe chart, most
shopsopened in the early
Firstly, near to 9000
shopswere inaugurated in the
Whereas, approximately 7000, retail
shopswere closed in the same
Secondly, In 2012, Closures were high in numbers,
That isaround 6000 and opened
shopsgraph dramatically went down reaching 4000.
Thirdly, above 7000 vendors were closed in the
year2013 and 5000 outlets were newly opened.
Furthermore, we can see the same proportion of open and closed
shops, in the
That isabout 6000.
On the other hand, There was a significant decrease in the
year2015. Less than 1000
shopswere closed and 4000
shopswere opened. In 2014 and 2015, opened and closed
shopshave almost the same in numbers which are 5000 closures and 4000 opened.
At the end
year2018, the ratio of closed is higher than opened which are 3,000 opened and 5000 closed.
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