A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear _________,

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Dear Meet, I hope

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letter finds you in good health and spirit. I'm happy to advise you about the camping

holiday

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. I know you love adventure, So, indeed you will enjoy

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holiday

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. You will be hiking in the middle of the forest ,admiring nature, different species of plants and animals and not to forget star gazing at night.

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, you will make new friends from diffident cultures and you will have a chance to explore food as well. There are some drawbacks, like no lights and no food stalls. So, make sure that you take enough food ,

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equipment like a torch, a small knife , and plastic bags which will help you during

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camping

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. I am planning to go on

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holiday

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and how about we plan it together

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summer. We plan

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of June and

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will take care of all the bookings. Looking forward to hearing from you. Please feel free to contact me if you have questions.

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sincerely, Stuti Sheth

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

176 words

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