In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside this vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Presently, most
of
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the
vehicles are controlled by humans. Correct article usage
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it would change with the concept of self
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self-drive
drive
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the advantages
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.
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disadvantages
, the most concerning issue of driverless cars
is, it
will make millions of Correct pronoun usage
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drivers
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drivers'
driver's
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and ride
ride sharing
, where driving is the primary occupation of people, with the introduction of Add a hyphen
ride-sharing
this
technology
many people will be jobless. Which will affect on countries economy Add a comma
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as well as
on
internal politics. As those vehicles will run by software, advanced Change preposition
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system
and internet
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the internet
thus
, some bad
intended people will be able to control Change the word
badly
cars
by hacking the system
it
would be dangerous for internal security.
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However
the advantages will be more significant than Add a comma
,However
disadvantages
. Nowadays, most Correct article usage
the disadvantages
accident
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accidents
caused
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are caused
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, human has feelings and emotions so not all the time they can be attentive while
driving, that is
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drive
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Indian
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the Indian
road
and safety department it is found that drink and Correct your spelling
Road
drive
caused 26% collision in 2016. Wrong verb form
driving
Wheres
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Where
self
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self-drive
drive
cars
will controlled
by advanced technology software and Change the verb form
be controlled
calculated
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a calculated
the calculated
system
where thousands of sensors raders
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radars
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traders
automatic
and Change the word
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improved
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an improved
breaking
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braking
system
will make the
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traveling
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travelling
more
safer.
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To conclude
it
, despite the Correct pronoun usage
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disadvantages
, advantages
are more significant and beneficial for all human beings. Correct article usage
the advantages
Diveless
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Driverless
cars
will be able to save more lives and passangers
will feel Correct your spelling
passengers
more
safer during travelling not only thatChange the word
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,
but Remove the comma
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also
the
driverless Correct article usage
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cars
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the ability to boost a country's economy by making citizens more productive.Change the verb form
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