In some countries, university students study near their home and live with their family, while in others students have to study in another city. Do the advantages of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

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when they study university. It is my belief that the positive effects of

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could certainly outweigh its disadvantages. There are several drawbacks for

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when they live away from home. A common reason is that the

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will not be taken

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of by their family.

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, clothes,etc, but when the

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away

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from the

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the

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will not be taken

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of by the family. Another negative aspect can be that

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and balance about

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must take

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. It will make them think too much about meals and drinks, housework, study,etc so

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must balance it logically.

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, in spite of these negative effects, living away from a

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can bring about important benefits. One obvious advantage is that the children will learn independence.

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finance, living time,etc

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good and necessary for people. Another positive effect is that learning way from,

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more and more develop your self.

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, each place will have a different environment so the

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will learn knowledge too much to help

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development . In conclusion,

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the

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learns the way from the

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, it is obvious that it

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. My view is that the problem

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can bring about more benefits than harm.