MamadjonovSamandar: Topic: Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people. Task: what are the advantages and disadvantages of children playing computer games?

Many doctors believe that using pc

games

for a period of time can have a detrimental effect on

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human mental and physical capabilities

while

becoming a permanent impediment factor in their academic and professional

career

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.

However

, The origin of

this

situation seems to stem from mainly two causes

although

several

solutions

remain open to us. In

this

essay, the causes and

solutions

will be discussed and given a concluding view. Perhaps one of the most significant and inevitable

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is the lack of

attention

.

This

means that especially

the

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young

children

find it difficult to place their

attention

on the subjects they are studying in the class which can lead to

decline

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in their academic score

while

dropping their

attention

level to ground zero.

In addition

to

this

, young

children

are often reluctant to put their energies

in

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the physical

game

because it requires endurance, stamina and willingness to put hard work

to

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the

game

.

Secondly

, In today's technology-focussed world, most of the pc

games

are built on the 3d view with infinite cool features which makes it hard for

the

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young

students

to resist the temptation and concentrate on

boring

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physical

game

with requires

lot

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of practice, strength and a regular work-out.

Furthermore

, these

children

have indulged

to

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themselves in

games

that they often don't take

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meal

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on time . There are many

solutions

to

this

problem but we are going to discuss some of the effective

solutions

which can

helps

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us to overcome

this

obstruction.

Firstly

, schools can incorporate mental and physical

games

as a part of

school

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curriculum

while

parents can try to encourage

students

to actively participate in these

games

by reducing their

attention

towards

game

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games

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.

Furthermore

, school institutes can organize

the

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game

events with prizes

while

highlighting the benefits of it mainly at

academic

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level. It can act as a trigger to arouse

students

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interest in these activities

Secondly

, It will help

students

to become more proactive by removing sluggishness and

productive

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throughout their class. In conclusion, If a joint effort would be taken by

school

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and parents

then

it can certainly drop the usage of

games

on

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children's

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which can be a beneficial factor for their academic and professional life.