The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two graphs give information on the number of mobile and landline
phone
contracts in four different countries over a ten year
period, from 2005 to 2015. Add a hyphen
ten-year
Overall
, there are huge differences in the number of people subscribed to phone
services in these countries, with citizens of the UK and Uruguay having the most phone
connections and India and Eritrea the
least.
Throughout the period in the Add a missing verb
having the
UK
there were more subscriptions to mobile lines than there were people, starting at 1.1 per capita rising to 1.2 in 2007 and remaining stable Add a comma
,UK
thereafter
. The country also
had the most fixed phone
services by some margin, though this
dropped slightly from approximately 58 to 52 lines per hundred people. Meanwhile, in Uruguay, subscriptions to mobile services increased dramatically, surpassing the UK in 2009 before finishing the period at 1.5 while
the proportion of fixed lines remained constantly
at around 0.3 per capita.
In India, there were similar numbers of subscriptions to both mobile and Change the word
constant
fixed line
contracts in 2005. Add a hyphen
fixed-line
However
, the former rose from around 0.05 to 0.8 per person, while
the latter dropped slightly over the decade. Finally
, despite a slight increase in mobile phone
use, numbers for neither phone
line type rose above 0.05 per capita in Eritrea.Submitted by marvinda.pereira on
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