The graph bbelow shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period 15 years
The given data illustrates the
comparission
of three Correct your spelling
comparison
campanies
in terms of their Correct your spelling
companies
waste
output between 2000 and 2015. The given wastes Use synonyms
measured
in Add a missing verb
are measured
tonnes
. Use synonyms
Overall
, there were significant changes in the amounts of Linking Words
waste
produced by all three Use synonyms
companies
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show
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companies
A and Use synonyms
B
saw Use synonyms
waste
output all over the Use synonyms
15 year
period, the amount of Add a hyphen
15-year
waste
produced by Use synonyms
company
Use synonyms
C
slightly increased.
In 200, Use synonyms
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company
A produced 12 Change the capitalization
Company
tonnes
of Use synonyms
waste
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while
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companies
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B
and Use synonyms
C
produced approximately 8 Use synonyms
tonnes
and 4 Use synonyms
tonnes
of Use synonyms
waste
material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the Use synonyms
waste
output of both Use synonyms
companies
Use synonyms
B
and Use synonyms
C
rose by Use synonyms
aound
2 Correct your spelling
around
tonnes
, Use synonyms
while
the figure for Linking Words
company
A tell by about 1 tonne. From 2005 to 2015, Use synonyms
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company
A decreased Change the capitalization
Company
waste
production by roughly 3 Use synonyms
tonnes
, and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
company
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Company
B
reduced Use synonyms
amount
of Correct article usage
the amount
waste
by around 7 Use synonyms
tonnes
, Use synonyms
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however
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,however
company
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c
save Use synonyms
increasing
trend till the end of the period and increased Correct article usage
an increasing
almost
4 Change preposition
by almost
tonnes
. By the end of 2015, Use synonyms
company
Use synonyms
C
had risen to 10 Use synonyms
tonnes
, Use synonyms
while
amounts of Linking Words
waste
from Use synonyms
companies
A and Use synonyms
B
had dropped to 8 Use synonyms
tonnes
and 3 Use synonyms
tonnes
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