Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: -say how you feel about his/her performance -give details of your music related activities -explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

Dear Maan, I'm your die-hard fan since childhood, after watching your performances in India's got talent.
, we both belong to the same hometown and we have some common friends. I am writing
letter to express my feelings about your yesterday's performance, I am feeling on cloud nine after watching your live performance. It was mesmerizing. We all enjoyed
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lot and your voice is fabulous.
, every single track of yours is on my tips. More than
, after listening to your tracks, I
started liking singing and joined your singing academy as well. I won many singing competitions and going to participate in India's got talent in the coming year. Even though, I joined your singing classes,But, would you mind giving me some tips regarding music? How I should prepare myself for
competition? what kind of tracks should I opt for
? Waiting for your positive response. Yours truly, Navjot Kaur.
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