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Discipline is ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some think discipline should be the responsibility of teachers

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Nowadays, school is a very vital foundation for every
child
, but
behaviour
 in school is getting worse day by day. There are several causes
impact
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that impact
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 their
behaviour
,
such
 as their parents spending less
time
 on their
behaviour
 and phones. The effects are influenced badly for their future.
On the other hand
, spending less
time
 with their
children
 is the main cause since if parents spend less
time
 with their
children
, their
children
 do
they
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what they
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 want, eventually, they will be egoistic or selfish.
Secondly
, phones, if I am not mistaken most teenagers waste their four or five hours per day watching unnecessary videos on social nets, these nets impact
children
's minds very badly because their minds will fill with unnecessary things.
Thirdly
, nowadays there are a lot of woman
teachers
 working in schools. There are not strict as man
teachers
. Because female
teachers
 are kind,
children
 do what they want, but before there were more male
teachers
, so the
children
's
behavior
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 was good.
On the other hand
, the government should provide every
child
 with psychologists and therapists. The psychologist should meet with the
child
 every week, during the meetings, the psychologist should do various exercises to improve the
child
's
behavior
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.
Moreover
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 schools need to hire more male
teachers
, in these
cases
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 we can treat
children
's
behaviour
.
Secondly
, in order to develop
behaviour
 in schools,
behaviour
 subjects should be introduced. In conclusion, I fully support with
idea
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the idea
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 as I mentioned above, the government should provide every
child
 with psychologists and therapists
also
 parents spend more
time
 with their
children
.
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