The graph below give the information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions

The graph below give the information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below give the information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions
The line graph illustrates the proportion of
people
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living in
Australia
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who came from different countries, namely Asia, the UK and other
regions
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over a period of more than 30 years, starting from 1976.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the rate of British
people
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saw a downward trend over the period shown,
while
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the proportion of Asia and other
regions
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showed an upward trend. The
percentage
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of
people
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who were born in the UK went down slightly from 13
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percent
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to 10
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percent
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from 1976 to 1986. There was a moderate drop of 5
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percent
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in the
percentage
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of
people
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living in
Australia
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who
were
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born in the UK from 1986 to 2011.
On the other hand
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, a gradual rise was seen in the
percentage
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of Asian
people
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from 3
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percent
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to 7
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percent
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from 1976 to 1996. The year 1996 saw a dramatic increase
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8
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percent
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in the
percentage
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of Asian
people
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living in
Australia
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. The proportion of
people
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living in
Australia
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who
living
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in other
regions
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fluctuates. Specifically, the figure for
people
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living in
Australia
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who came from other countries declined slowly from 11
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percent
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to 6
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percent
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from 1976 to 1991.
However
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, the year 1991 witnessed a
moderately
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rise from 6
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percent
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to 12
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percent
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in the rate of
people
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living in
Australia
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who were from other
regions
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, australia, regions, percentage, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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