The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph illustrates the owning and renting habitats in

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the percentage

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of British and Welsh families in 1918 compared with 2011.

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, as the chart showed, the

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renting had touched a high percentage in 1918 and it had fallen down steeply by

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time.

In contrast

, the percentage of British and Welsh owners had been rising up since 1918 ,and it was at its peak by 2001.

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reputation

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renting accommodation seemed to be popular in 1918 at almost 80 % of households

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had decreased respectively around 5 decades when its bar was identically at

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same level as people who owned houses at five-tenth. Meanwhile, the number of owning residences rose sharply against renters.

Finally

, some citizens would agree that buying a house is more worth than renting which they can not be an owner themself.

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others have no reason to buy a house and think that owning houses is expensive

as well as

unaffordable.