The diagram shows the process of electricity production through Ocean Thermal Energy Conversation (OTEC).

The diagram shows the process of electricity production through Ocean Thermal Energy Conversation (OTEC).
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The diagram shows the process of electricity production through Ocean Thermal
Energy
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Conversation (OTEC). As is shown by the diagram, Ocean Thermal
Energy
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Conversation (OTEC) system converts heat
energy
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into
electric
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electricity
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by crossing through different stages.
To begin
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with, the first step
to
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is to
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warm seawater. The hot seawater is turned into
water
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vapour
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by solar
energy
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, and
this
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warm
water
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introduced
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into the evacuated evaporation chamber, where it boils. In the next stage when the
water
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is boiling, salt is deposited and
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saltiless
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saltiness
saltless
water
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vapour
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turns on the turbine to generate electricity.
Subsequently
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, when it powers the turbine, the
water
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vapour
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enters the condensing chamber, which is cooled by the cold seawater. The
water
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vapour
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condensed in
this
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chamber
divided
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into two parts one is the drinking
water
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and another is the waste salt
water
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which is released back into the sea in order to repeat the whole process.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, water, vapour with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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