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You recently organised an all- day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel, in their feedback, participants said they liked the hotel but were not happy with the food served for lunch Write a letter to the manager, in your letter, Say what the participants liked about the hotel Explain why the were unhappy about the food Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future

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Dear Sir, I write to commend you and your staff on the service offered to us during the all-day meeting of my company in your hotel. Your staff were very professional in their service and it gave us total satisfaction. The architectural design of the structure and the general ambience of the environment made the stay a memorable experience for all the participants of the meeting.
However
, the food served for lunch, though well cooked and properly served, contained more pepper than was acceptable for a lot of my guests. A few who braved the pepper to consume it suffered severe stomach upset afterwards
while
 some could not dare to eat it. I wish to recommend that you consider keeping the hot chilli content of your meals minimal in future and provide additional chilli on request for those who prefer their meals peppered. Thank you for your usual understanding as I look forward to partnering with you in the nearest future Yours Faithfully Elisha Emmanuel
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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