Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Many
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prefer to stay in the
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where is their native hometown or somewhere near where they were born. In
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and will provide the reasons for
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. There are two main reasons why
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choose to reside in their own city. The main reason is that they have memories of their childhood as they schooled and worked throughout their entire in the city.
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may have led them to station in their own cities.
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, some
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married with
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local women and have relatives in their state, and
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makes them inhabit their local area.
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, my parents did not desire to move their house even during the
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pandemic as they love their home. There are some advantages of living in our own states.
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,
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can enjoy their local and native foods. In my hometown,
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, native residents can eat all local foods including
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regional foods
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as Shan-Burmese laksa which cannot be tasted
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. A
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advantage is that, indeed, a person has been familiar with his native
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as well as
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the
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administration system. If he wishes and tries hard, he may become a famous political leader in his
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.
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, the current US president, Joe Biden, worked as a lawyer in his hometown, Delaware when he was an apprentice.
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, some drawbacks may be noted. In the first
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, one will not get enough experience about living abroad or in another
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.
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, he may not have foreign experiences
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as thriving to survive in another
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or knowledge of cultural diversity.
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, he will have some limits of language, and lose opportunities for learning additional languages. To be specific, foreign students have the chance to pursue additional languages, and it will greatly benefit their future careers. In conclusion, living in a native
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or familiar places near the native
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provides both advantages and disadvantages, and some
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choose to stay near their hometowns to keep their memories and for easy living. Given
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situation, it is recommended that
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should explore other towns or abroad to expand their knowledge without staying in their comfort zone.
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The essay demonstrates a basic understanding of the task, but it lacks depth and comprehensive ideas. The examples provided are somewhat relevant, but they are not sufficient to support the main points effectively. The reasons for staying in one's hometown are presented, but the discussion lacks depth and complexity.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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