Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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One of the biggest issues the world faces today is the big amount of packages of
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thrown into the environment. And so, in the midst of all worries and efforts to reduce
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kind of
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, people have different opinions about whether the responsible for diminishing packages would-be manufacturers and supermarkets on their packaging process or would-be consumers on their buying-conscious habits.
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expose an opinion. Consumers have some guilt for the increase in
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disposal if they hadn’t bought these products with these wraps, producers wouldn’t supply markets with more packed products. And
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, who
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throws the product’s
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in the rubbish bin, utterly transforming
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material into
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, is the supermarket customer. So, there is no way to say that consumer has no influence on
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production.
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, decreasing the trash on the planet depends on each citizen of the world.
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, undoubtedly there is a big part of the responsibility of manufacturers to reduce
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production as they are the main producer of
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kind of garbage. If they find out another way of packing their goods and
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different ways of setting up supermarket shelves, consumers will adhere to them and by doing so less
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will be thrown into nature. Supermarkets have
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partial bargaining power to reduce packaging in products, as they can avoid buying and exposing on their shelves goods from brands that don’t do an effort to reduce non-ecological components in their packaging process. For all that was mentioned so far, I do believe that the main responsible for creating and
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for reducing
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litter
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, is the manufacturer. Because production phase is the one where feedstock comes to life, or
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, turns to be a final product, and it is
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the step where people have more choices about what it will be made of, or how it is going to be made. After that, the next steps are just to deal with what was already made. In conclusion, every part has its own responsibility for the reduction of
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litter
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, especially making pressure on the manufacturer.
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, the producer is the one who has the utter responsibility to choose whether the
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will be produced or not.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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