In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
In
this
modern era, people
used to use credit
cards
rather than using cash
for buying items, but in the past
there was no chance to get rid of using Add a comma
,past
cash
and people
were carrying several cash
in their pockets and exposing themselves to thiefs
.
There are numerous benefits Correct your spelling
thieves
of for
using Change preposition
to
credit
cards
. Firstly
, credit
cards
give the owner more safety than holding cash
. For example
, people
who use credit
cards
are more secure because it requires a password to access your
money. Correct pronoun usage
their
Secondly
, credit
cards
now are more fascinating and It is highly recommended for traveling
Change the spelling
travelling
due to
its
ability to transform one currency to another foreign country Correct pronoun usage
their
by
just a few clicks. Change preposition
with
For instance
, without using a credit
card, it is compulsory to transfer local cash
to foreign cash
for purchase but with the use of credit
Correct article usage
a credit
card
Add a comma
,card
this
obstacle has been tackled.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks that could affect the reputation of using credit
cards
. Credit
cards
lack control of spending and it can surprise the owner as a consequence
of its usability, such
as if you go to a shop and just scan your phone for every purchase. Furthermore
, credit
card technology requires an
Correct article usage
the
internet
to work and without it would not have the accessibility to our Correct your spelling
Internet
credit
cards
.
In conclusion, it is true that there are several advantages of using credit
cards
and there are more benefits especially
in Add the comma(s)
,especially
this
modern era, however
Add a comma
,however
people
are still facing some drawbacks of this
type of technology.Submitted by iimux771 on
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