Some people belive that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others believe they are dangerous and negatively affect society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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267 words

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