Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: •recommend a city • suggest a few jobs that your friend could do • give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

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Dear Megi, How are you?I hope to have a nice day.I am writing
this
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letter because Kejdi
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explain
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me that you will come
in
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to
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my country to
work
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for 6 months.
Firstly
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,I want to suggest
you
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to you
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when you came here I want that you live in Tirana because is a big city and I live in Tirana.You can live in the flats but I want to live in my
hause
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house
because I live alone and for me will be my pleasure if you come.I recommend
to live
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living
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in Tirana because has a lot of shops,restaurants,parks,lakes and the zoo.
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,some of my friends can help you to find a job.You can
work
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manager in
the
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a
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restaurant,
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a reception
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reception
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in
the
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a
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hotel,
engineer
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or engineer
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but I want to
work
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in my company because I have
need
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a need
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for employers. I am waiting for your answer.I hope to
work
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in my company.If you choose to
work
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in my company I promise you that can make a lot of fun. Best wishes, Xhesjana Mydini
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