Nowadays,
internet
developingReplace the word
show examples
have been affecting
peopleChange noun form
show examples
life in the
last
decades. Some
people
believe that
internetCorrect article usage
show examples
is a way to keep
people
together
while
others think that they are becoming more isolated. In my opinion, more and more
people
are becoming more isolated and they have less personal contact with others.
On the one hand, in recent times,
people
can communicate more easily and fastly. Nowadays,
internetAdd an article
show examples
is the best way to be in touch with family or friends.
Hence
, they can communicate
throughoutChange preposition
show examples
social networks
such
as
facebookCapitalize word
show examples
or Instagram with just a click away. And it is not necessary that
people
stay in the same country at the same time.
Moreover
, even at work, it is very common to have meetings online or
callsChange preposition
show examples
, and
people
do not see face to face.
On the other hand
, some
people
do not see the necessity to be in touch with others.
Thus
, when they
needAdd the particle
show examples
obtain information or they have questions they do not go out home.
PeopleChange noun form
show examples
solution
thisChange preposition
show examples
only
checkingChange preposition
show examples
the
internet
instead
of
have Unnecessary verb
show examples
a Correct article usage
show examples
communicationReplace the word
show examples
with someone.
For example
, some
people
who need to do a transaction in the bank,
they Correct pronoun usage
show examples
only enter
to Change preposition
show examples
the website and there they have all the answers.
In conclusion,
Correct article usage
show examples
internetCorrect article usage
show examples
is a really useful tool and
people
decide how
much contactChange the quantifier
show examples
have with other
people
. In my opinion,
people
need to be more in touch with
otherCorrect determiner usage
show examples
because communication is important to transmit their feelings and thoughts.