The Diagram below describes the lifecycle of the silkworm and how silk cloth is produced in South east Asia.

The Diagram below describes the lifecycle of the silkworm and how silk cloth is 

produced in South east Asia.
The illustrations portray the different stages in the
life
of the
silkworm
and how
silkworm
cocoons
are used to make
silk
cloth
.
Overall
, silkworms have an average
life
span of ten weeks, and there are four main stages in the
life
cycle: egg, larvae, cocoon, and adult moth, and six in the
silk
cloth
production process: selecting, boiling, unwinding, twisting, weaving, and dying. The journey of the
silk
worm's
life
begins with eggs, which are laid by an adult female moth on melburry leaves. After around 10 days, the eggs hatch and
silkworm
larvae emerge. The larvae feed on the melburry leaves for about 4 to 6 weeks and
then
start to create protective layers called
cocoons
by spinning a single strand of
silk
around themselves. It takes them approximately 3 to 8 days to produce enough
silk
to surround their whole body. They stay in their
cocoons
for a fortnight to transform into adult moths.
Finally
, after the female moths lay eggs, the
life
cycle begins again. To produce
silk
cloth
,
silkworm
cocoons
are first selected. Those found suitable for production,
subsequently
boiled in water before being unwound into strands of
silk
that measured about 300 to 900 long.
Further
, they are twisted to form thicker
silk
threads.
Finally
, some of the threads go straight to the dyeing process,
while
the others are woven into
cloth
, which is
then
dyed.The produced
silk
threads are used in the embroidery textile industry for sewing clothes.
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