"Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience."
"In recent years,
homework
has attacted
the general public's attention. Some people believe that Correct your spelling
attracted
school
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schoolchildren
children
should not be given homework
by their teachers, whereas
others argue that homework
plays an important role in the education of children
. After through
consideration, for my Correct your spelling
thorough
part
I partly agree with Add a comma
,part
this
idea
.This
essay will give reasons to support both views.
On the one hand
there are some reasons to support the Add a comma
,hand
idea
that Some people believe that school
children
should not be given homework
by their teachers, whereas
others argue that homework
plays an important role in the education of children
. Firstly
, to day
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today
student
go to Fix the agreement mistake
students
school
everyday
, they learn Replace the word
every day
main
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the main
a main
subject
in the morning and afternoon too, so they must spend a lot of Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
time
to study
with Change the verb form
studying
teacher
, they will be tired and do not have free Correct article usage
the teacher
time
to relax. Almost student
go back home after 5 pm and then
they just have time
for individual and dinner, then
they quickly everything
to do Add a missing verb
do everything
homework
, you know, they go to sleep so late and it affect
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affects
to
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apply
them
health and quality Change the pronoun
their
life
. They feel stress more than if they have Change preposition
of life
not
free Correct your spelling
no
time
to relax time
example do excises, listen to music....
Almost parents want Replace the punctuation
...
them
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their
children
grow
up both knowledge and health. Add the particle
to grow
Secondly
, if the teacher must give homework
for
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to
student
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a student
everyday
and Replace the word
every day
next
day they must spend Correct article usage
the next
time
for check homework
and it affect
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affects
to
the Change preposition
apply
time
for new
lesson, Correct article usage
the new
instead
give a short exam at the
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apply
school
and check it after they finish lesson
, Add an article
the lesson
a lesson
student
will remember faster.
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the student
a student
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hand
there are some reasons against the statement Add a comma
,hand
that
Some people believe that Correct word choice
apply
school
children
should not be given homework
by their teachers, whereas
others argue that homework
plays an important role in the education of children
. On top that
, must learn with practice, so after Change preposition
of that
the
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apply
school
student
must do homework
at home, do that
to remember Correct pronoun usage
apply
lesson
they learned. One important reason is that Add an article
the lesson
normaly
they usually play Correct your spelling
normally
game
so Fix the agreement mistake
games
them
parents want Correct pronoun usage
their
they
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them
do
Fix the infinitive
to do
homework
instead
do other things out
.
All in all, from what has been discussed above. it would be very difficult to evaluate whether Change preposition
apply
this
idea
is reasonable or not. And it is still a controversial issue. In my opinion, I am in favour of both sides of this
idea
. The government should have further
consideration on this
issue."Submitted by buithuongkt on
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