You have bought furniture from a store. When you received, there were some damages. Write a letter to the concerned store manager. In your letter, you should: •Give information about the furniture. • Explain the damage • Ask the manager to solve your issue

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Dear store manager, I am writing

this

to complain about the purchase I made from your store yesterday morning,

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Thursday 25th May 2023, my order number is #123 Yesterday, I ordered two chairs and a round table at your store and I

choosed

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chose

choose

the method of delivery that

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would send the purchase to my home after doing

payment

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. I received the order after I get home

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hour. When I checked the condition of the

funitures

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furniture

, I saw that one chair has a broken point

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corner

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. I want to refurbish all decoration for my kitchen so every

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piece of funitures

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funitures

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furniture

should

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perfect condition. I am not happy with

this

purchase.

According to

the exchange and return policy of your company, I would like to have a new chair with the surface in good condition. The process of the

refurbishmnet

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refurbishment

refurbishments

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weekend, so please

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me a new one tomorrow. I trust

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matter will be resolved soon. Best regards, Mai Huong

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