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You have bought furniture from a store. When you received, there were some damages. Write a letter to the concerned store manager. In your letter, you should: •Give information about the furniture. • Explain the damage • Ask the manager to solve your issue

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Dear store manager, I am writing
this
 to complain about the purchase I made from your store yesterday morning,
on
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Thursday 25th May 2023, my order number is #123 Yesterday, I ordered two chairs and a round table at your store and I
choosed
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chose
choose
 the method of delivery that
shipper
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the shipper
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 would send the purchase to my home after doing
payment
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. I received the order after I get home
1
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hour. When I checked the condition of the
funitures
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furniture
, I saw that one chair has a broken point
at
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corner
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. I want to refurbish all decoration for my kitchen so every
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piece of funitures
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funitures
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furniture
 should
in
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a
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perfect condition. I am not happy with
this
 purchase.
According to
 the exchange and return policy of your company, I would like to have a new chair with the surface in good condition. The process of the
refurbishmnet
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refurbishment
refurbishments
start
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in
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this
 weekend, so please
sending
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 me a new one tomorrow. I trust
this
 matter will be resolved soon. Best regards, Mai Huong
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