In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is certainly true that in many workplaces, online
communication
is getting more common than meeting
face to
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face
. It is my belief that the
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disadvantages
of online
communication
is
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getting common
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and outweight
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its
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advantages. On the one hand, there are
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several
benefits of
this
method. A common advantage is that organizing a meeting or a conversation online will save more time than meeting at
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. Like studying online, people don’t have to show up at a place to meet with each other.
For instance
, my Store Director often launches a meeting via Zoom when there are some problems to discuss when she is not at
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. Before the meeting, she just texts everyone to set up an
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appointment
. Another positive aspect can be that employees can quickly approach a
lot
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documents,
files
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and files
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, and easy to share some online resources.
On the other hand
, online
communication
in workplaces
instead
of meeting
face
to
face
has brought along a number of issues that cannot be ignored. One obvious
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disadvantage
is that the
face
to
face
communication
skills will be decreased. Meeting
onine
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online
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sometimes
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can not help employees explain fully idea, the discussion not works because it’s hard to see the body language.
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body language or concern
to
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individual’s
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an individual’s
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emotional
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may effects
to
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communication
skills. Another negative effect is
that
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technology issues. The meeting will be interrupted when having some problems
about
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electric
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, wifi connection,
computer
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and computer
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issues.
For example
,
last
week I discussed with my partner
about
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a case of customer
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, we had to solve that problem
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that day but it was
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cut at my place
while
we talking,
our
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process are clearly
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affected
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. In conclusion, despite the fact that online
communication
is getting more common than meeting
face to
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face
in many workplaces has positive benefits, I believe that the
disavantages outweight
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disadvantages outweigh
the advantages.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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