you rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom. write a letter to the state agency. in the letter explain your situation describe the problems with the house say what would you like to happen write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Faten Daas. I am writing because I am not really satisfied with the
accomodation
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accommodation
accommodations
that I
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from your agency. I let you know that I have rented
this
4 bedroom house with two other
student
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. We're asking you to look for another student for the spare room. Since
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the cost is too high. We would like him to share with us the fee.
Besides
, I've found
serieous
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serious
matters in
this
house that should be fixed
immidiately
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immediately
.
First,
the sink is leaking and
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a mess
that is
really annoying.
then
, the electricity cut
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will cause troubles with my work since my computer turns off. I would like you
take
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my request into
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consideration
as soon as
posible
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possible
before we all move in. I am looking forward to your reply. kind regards,
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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