Some people believe that universities should make sports a compulsory module on all degree courses as rates of obesity are getting higher and higher. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Regarding students' weight gain, sport is said to have been compulsory in all universities' curricula.
there are so many sports facilities and complexes in universities and academic spaces, I completely believe that authorities have to set some incentives and restrictive legislation to improve scholars' activities.
, the first basics of life are taught in universities, and there is the foundation of learning. so it is amply obvious that we have to learn to tackle society's issues, and obsessive weight gain is one of them. By replacing sports plans in university courses, students will have changed their lifestyle, and
, they will putten their knowledge on others .
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