Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problems.
The
population
of urban areas
are increasing day
by day
and urban conurbations are expanding all the time. More and more of us use to live in urban areas
. Although
cities
are more attractive places to live, and they provide lots
of educational as well as
job
and health facilities, there are lots
of problems facing
by Wrong verb form
faced
cities
. This
essay will examine some of these problems and proposed
some solutions.
One of the biggest Wrong verb form
propose
problem
facing people who live in big Fix the agreement mistake
problems
cities
is the less
Change the quantifier
fewer
job
opportunities due to
lots
of job
seekers. In many big cities
finding a job
is very big challenging because every city have
a capacity level Change the verb form
has
for example
, in Perth, a regional city of Australia, a few years ago every student want to move Perth
Change preposition
to Perth
due to
its lots
of job
opportunities as well as
reasonable accommodation but now it’s capacity is full and there is no more job
and accommodation also
. To solve this
problem
, the government
should start quota
system for each educational institute Correct article usage
a quota
according to
city capacity when they have a specific number of seats then
number
of students will Change the article
a number
the number
be fix
and they will have more employment opportunities and they could find Change the verb form
be fixed
easily
living Add an article
an easily
the easily
place
.
Another issue is traffic and air pollution, most of Fix the agreement mistake
places
urban
Add an article
the urban
areas
are overrun of
cars and other vehicles, and there is Change preposition
by
great
deal of traffic congestion. Change the article
a great
Population
of urban Add an article
The population
areas
are increasing day
by day
due to
migration
of people from rural Correct article usage
the migration
areas
towards cities
, as population
increases defiantly the number of traffic vehicles will increases and exhaust fume is cause of air pollution. This
problem
over cum by introducing hybrid and full
electric cars and bikes, and Change the adjective
fully
government
should try to introduce fashion
of cycling, Correct article usage
the fashion
this
will helping
to clean Change the form of the verb
help
environment
Correct article usage
the environment
as well as
good for healthy
life.
Add an article
a healthy
Finally
, one more issue is less greenery in cities
. That is
to say, in
most Change preposition
apply
of
urban Change preposition
apply
areas
have very less green belts, gardens and trees, this
because
when Add a missing verb
is because
population
Correct article usage
the population
increasing
Wrong verb form
increases
then
real estate build
new housing societies and they crush all greenery for their profit. Less greenery, more temperature. To solve Correct subject-verb agreement
builds
this
problem
, government
put Add an article
the government
ban
on real estate to construct Add an article
a ban
new
society on any green belt, if someone Correct article usage
a new
break
the rule authorities charge Change the verb form
breaks
some
heavy amount of plenty.
In conclusion, Correct determiner usage
a
although
urban areas
face a range of problems and it is very clear, it is difficult but not impossible to tackle these issues,
and improve Remove the comma
apply
quality
of life in Correct article usage
the quality
cities
. Government
and local bodies must take action against them on front
foot, Add an article
the front
otherwise
the future will be getting worse in future.Add a comma
,otherwise
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