when a new technological device becomes available, some people buy it right away, others wait until many have adopted it. Which view do you agree with?

There are two different kinds of views about new gadgets, some people purchase new technological devices after introduction; other groups wait until they have been accepted by a vast majority of society.
it seems to be weird and unreasonable that we use unknown and new devices, I believe acceptance of the risks will lead to innovations and prosperity. Technology paves the way for people to have simple and acceptable life, by controlling and satisfying their needs, and in
recent decades, our progression in gadgets has been raising.
In other words
, having used new devices, people will find their life much easier than past.
For example
, cell phones are one the most striking feature in our life that has helped us in many aspects.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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