when a new technological device becomes available, some people buy it right away, others wait until many have adopted it. Which view do you agree with?

#device #people #right

There are two different kinds of views about new gadgets, some people purchase new technological devices after introduction; other groups wait until they have been accepted by a vast majority of society.

Although

it seems to be weird and unreasonable that we use unknown and new devices, I believe acceptance of the risks will lead to innovations and prosperity. Technology paves the way for people to have simple and acceptable life, by controlling and satisfying their needs, and in

last

recent decades, our progression in gadgets has been raising.

In other words

, having used new devices, people will find their life much easier than past.

For example

, cell phones are one the most striking feature in our life that has helped us in many aspects.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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when a new technological device becomes available, some people buy it right away, others wait until many have adopted it. Which view do you agree with?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural area find it is difficult to access the university education. Universities should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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