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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: suggest a speaker say what they would contribute to the event

#bookshop #members #guest #speaker #event #series #talks #people #e-mail
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 James, I am writing to you
due to
 the advertisement I saw in the newspaper yesterday. that includes a public recommendation of a guest speaker. As a teacher, I would suggest Mister Amine, an international Language teacher and trainer. Mister Amine has got a huge experience in teaching
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 training language teachers
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 the founder of the Teflers Academy training
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. He would be a great contribution to other teachers, parents, and students who want to be teachers in the future. He will explain different approaches to teaching and modern methodologies for mixed-aged students and all levels. I hope you could take my suggestion into consideration. I will be happy to feed you with his contact information if you would like to invite him. Looking forward to having your response. It will be my pleasure if you want my assistance concerning my idea. yours sincerely, Miss Faten
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