The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given map illustrates the changes in Ryemouth village from 1995 to the present day. On overview, the fishing port is been demolished.

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, the farmland and the forest park

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are

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converted to a sports ground. The Ryemouth is a coastal village with

sea

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a sea

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in the south. In the year 1995, there was

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a fishing port, but it got demolished later. And in its close

proximity

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,proximity

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there was a fish market which got

rebuild

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rebuilt

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into

few

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a few

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apartments.

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this

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, the shops facing the fish market

also

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also

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apply

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were converted

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into

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resturants

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restaurants

. The hotel

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the south-eastern side now includes a parking space too. At the northeast of Ryemouth was a big forest park and

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farmland.

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, that area was combined to build a golf course and

few

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a few

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tennis courts.

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, new houses

were build

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were built

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in the

the

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apply

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housing area that was

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the north-western side.

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that, a road was

also

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constructed that runs towards the southern side of the village.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

transformation
key features
contrasting
developments
alterations
enhancements
infrastructure
recreational facilities
emerging
adaptation
population growth
connectivity
accessibility
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aesthetics
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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Some experts say that cyclists should take exams before they are allowed to ride on public roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?