The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given map illustrates the changes in Ryemouth village from 1995 to the present day. On overview, the fishing port is been demolished.

Additionally

, the farmland and the forest park

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are

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converted to a sports ground. The Ryemouth is a coastal village with

sea

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a sea

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in the south. In the year 1995, there was

also

a fishing port, but it got demolished later. And in its close

proximity

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,proximity

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there was a fish market which got

rebuild

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rebuilt

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into

few

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a few

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apartments.

Along with

this

, the shops facing the fish market

also

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apply

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were converted

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into

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resturants

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restaurants

. The hotel

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the south-eastern side now includes a parking space too. At the northeast of Ryemouth was a big forest park and

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apply

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farmland.

However

, that area was combined to build a golf course and

few

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a few

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tennis courts.

Also

, new houses

were build

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were built

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in the

the

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apply

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housing area that was

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the north-western side.

Along with

that, a road was

also

constructed that runs towards the southern side of the village.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

165 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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developments
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population growth
connectivity
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