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The line graph provides information about the changing of inhabitants in three different of provinces of Oregon, the USA over the period in question.

The line graph provides information about the changing of inhabitants in three different of provinces of Oregon, the USA over the period in question.
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The given line graph represents the
population
 change in three different
region
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 of Oregon from 1940 to 2000.
Overall
, the most crowded county was
Washington
 for the period of 60 years, and
other
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in other
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 provinces: Columbia's and
Yamhill
's
population
 increased slowly and showed similar features over time. In 1940,
Washington
's inhabitants were nearly 75
thousands
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thousand
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 and
increased
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 gradually
for
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over
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next
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the next
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 30 years. The
population
 of
Washington
 was roughly three times higher than its closest counterpart which was
Yamhill
,
then
 inclined rapidly from 1970 to 2000. Eventually,
Washington
's inhabitants reached well over 240
thousands
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thousand
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 of individuals, which was a peak, in 2000. County of Colombia and
Yamhill
 had quite similar
trend
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 during
60-year
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 period.
Yamhill
's
population
 slightly increased to 45
thousands
 of people in 1970,
whereas
 Colombia's
population
 only increased by 5
thousands
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thousand
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 citizens and reached just over 30
thousands
 of individuals.
Then
, in the next 30 years, both
Yamhill
 and Colombia approximately doubled
its
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their
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population
 and reached 90 and 75
thousands
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thousand
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 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, washington, yamhill, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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