The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.
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The chart
give
information about how many Change the verb form
gives
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
in five Australian cities have the
habit of purchasing and drinking Add a missing verb
had the
coffee
and tea in last
4 weeks. Correct article usage
the last
Overall
, as we can see, Melbourne and Hobart have the highest percentage
of drinkers in
going to cafes for Change preposition
apply
a
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apply
coffee
or tea, and Sydney
has the highest percentage
in
buying fresh Change preposition
of
coffee
.
It is easily apparent that Hobart has the greatest percentage
of residents who buy instant coffee
which is just a little under 55% and slightly higher than Brisbane. Moreover
, the residents of Sydney
have the lowest percent
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percentage
in
consuming instant Change preposition
of
coffee
which is merely a little over 45%. However
, the greatest percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
who buy fresh coffee
goes to Sydney
which
was approximately 44%, slightly lower than Correct pronoun usage
apply
Sydney
's citizens
fresh Change noun form
citizens'
citizen's
coffee
consumption.
In Adelaide, around 50 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
use instant coffee
which is considerably much higher than the consumption of fresh coffee
, in one contrary, is slightly higher than going to cafes. In Melbourne, around 64% of residents prefer going to cafes which is significantly greater than the percentage
of people
who purchase fresh coffee
which is about 43%.Submitted by omidateur on
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