Most employers nowadays put increasing emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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When it comes to hiring, social
skill
is a primary
abilitys
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ability
abilities
required. But some people think it should be taken into account
along with
other
qualification
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.
While
it is vital to some extent,
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agree with the statement because of the
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of
other aspect
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another aspect
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. On the one hand, believe that social
skill
is important
along with
qualification
. Some aspects it is correct
such
as a product base
company
's main power is sales, which is why
this
company
's employers choices all the time social
skill
employees.Social
skill
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skills
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reflect a
person
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ability to make good
relationship
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relationships
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with their customer and coworker, it
is help
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their sales
skill
and relationship.
Social
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skilful person easily enter few
company
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because it is
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a powerfull
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powerfull
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powerful
tool .
On the other hand
, people believe that social
skill
is
skill
but it is not important
in addition
to good qualifications for job success.
For example
,
programmer
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programmers
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,doctors,
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employess
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employees
so
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and so
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on. Google,
microsoft
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Microsoft
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,
apple
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and apple
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is a big tech
company
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companies
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, they choices
there
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their
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employess
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employees
to
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becouse
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because
they do not need social
skill
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skills
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employess
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employees
.
Furthermore
, academic
qualification
is more important for some time when a fresh graduate looking job, it is helpful for the first job and
also
no need for any kind of experience.
To sum up
,social
skill
a
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good tool for success but it is not important because academic
qualification
and other creative skills are equally important.
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