FEW PEOPLE DEVOTE TIME TO HOBBIES NOWADASY.SAY WHY YIU THINK THIS IS THE CASE AND WHAT EFFECT THIS HAS ON THE INDIVIDUAL AND SOCIETY IN GENERAL

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Nobody can live without

practcing

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practising

favourite

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their favourite

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sport, reading

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a preferrable

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preferrable

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preferable

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book, playing on

musical

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a musical

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instrument or enjoying

swim

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a swim

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. If these

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part

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of your life but not a job, it means you have a wonderful

hoppy

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hope

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and

keep

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doing

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Although

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hoppies

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hippies

shoppes

are very important to society, not all people are ready to do and spare time for it. Hoppy changes your mode easily,

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however

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most of the time we don't have enough energy to practice it. In terms of improving mental health, the solution will be in the hoppy.

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someone is walking without reason but

jus

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just

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because he likes it, every bad idea will go and be replaced with

vivde

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vivid

video

images cultivated in his mind. Don't be shy because you have fun

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apply

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doing things

out

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outside

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of your job. Be proud of doing it now or later. I remember that day of sharing activities with others and how

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changed their life and treatment with me. I am going outside now to meet new friends and start new discussions.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

171 words

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FEW PEOPLE DEVOTE TIME TO HOBBIES NOWADASY.SAY WHY YIU THINK THIS IS THE CASE AND WHAT EFFECT THIS HAS ON THE INDIVIDUAL AND SOCIETY IN GENERAL

The Greeting

In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?

These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career seversl times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is important for children to learn what is right and what is wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree? What sort of punsihment should be given?