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You came to know about a piece of equipment that would help you at your workplace. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter – describe the equipment – explain how it might be useful at your workplace – offer help in purchasing it

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about the lack of
tables
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 in our office and to request three special
tables
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 for three classes. As you may know, the educational system has changed and we need to adapt to
the
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international standards.
Therefore
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, having special
tables
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 for students and tutors is an essential part of our teaching environment.
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, the old
tables
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 are outdated and do not match our new decoration and equipment. I understand that it may be difficult to find suitable
tables
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 for our office, but I would like to offer you my assistance in
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 matter. I have done some research on Google and found some options that might suit our needs and budget. Thank you for your help and support. Yours sincerely,
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • state-of-the-art
  • ergonomic
  • cost-effective
  • streamline processes
  • boost productivity
  • enhance efficiency
  • high-quality
  • integrate into our workflow
  • ROI (return on investment)
  • implement
  • facilitate
  • procurement
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