The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The table illustrates two different years of manufacturing which shared the worldwide phone markets of several companies in 2005 and 2006. The figure is given in percentage.
Overall
, there are many bands of phone production Linking Words
such
as Nokia, Motorola, Samsung, Sony Ericsson, LG, BenQ and others. The data has shown that 2 years of sales had stabled, which 3 top ranked were Nokia Motorola and Samsung respectively in both 2004 and 2005. Linking Words
Additionally
, the least popular market share was BenQ Mobile in the same period.
On the whole,many companies especially in the first and second Linking Words
well known
markets were increasing much more percentage of sales by 3% - 4% increasing, which the percentages of those companies were combined to be more than Add a hyphen
well-known
a
half of Correct article usage
apply
wholesalers
and Nokia was reaching rather than a quarter continuously. Correct article usage
the wholesalers
However
, Samsung, Sony Ericsson and LG were stable as a middle market of mobile Linking Words
phone's
popular. Change noun form
phones
As a result
, other bands were dropping sales including BenQ Mobile which had Linking Words
been
decreased almost Unnecessary verb
apply
a
half of the early years.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stabled" was used 2 times.
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