The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.

The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.
The charts and graphs illustrate the average use of
water
in the year 2004 in Australia.
Overall
,
water
consumed in the residential areas is significantly high,
whereas
the others are only quite near to each other in the surveyed year.
On the other hand
, a house, bathroom and garden are recorded to head the list
To begin
with, the pie chart illustrates the amount of
water
consumption by the given establishment. Residential is the highest averaging 70%
while
Industrial and Business are near to each other averaging 11% and 10%
whereas
, government
water
usage consists 6% and it is time two higher than others that average only 3% Looking in detail, the residential area consists of a bathroom and garden that consumes about 27% and 28% of
water
whereas
, washing clothes and toilet consumption is about 35% in total.
While
, the kitchen is the least, averaging only 10%
To conclude
, residential houses consume a huge amount of
water
because of the chores needed to be done.
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