The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvements were made to the transport network, and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives information about approximate trip times in a city centre fixed after changes were implemented to the transportation system. The bar chart represents data about
cost
per kilometre for different types of Add an article
the cost
transport
.
The most expensive type of transport
is taxi
with Correct article usage
a taxi
the
cost of 1.80 Correct article usage
a
euro
per kilometre. Even though, it is the fastest way of getting around the city with only 12 minutes after improvements Fix the agreement mistake
euros
has
been made. Another way of Change the verb form
have
traveling
fast is driving a car. Despite the biggest increase in journey times it still remains the second place in spending Change the spelling
travelling
time
on travel.
The cheapest way of transportation is taking a ride on a bus. The cost of the kilometre is 0,40 euro
, Fix the agreement mistake
euros
however
it is the slowest Add a comma
,however
transport
. Event
after improvements when Correct your spelling
Even
bus
got faster by 5 minutes the total journey Add an article
the bus
time
is 23 minutes. Tram is another type of transport
that is
economical. This
form of public transport
also
became much faster and it seen that the biggest improvements has
been made Change the verb form
have
for
trams.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, the fastest ways of travelling are taxi
and Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
car
, but at the same Fix the agreement mistake
cars
time
they are the most expensive. Bus and tram are slower Add a comma
,time
Correct word choice
than
that
other vehicles, Correct your spelling
than
however
the time
of transportation was reduced and they are more economical compared to car and taxiSubmitted by sevrukov.stepan on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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