You have just read an article in a national newspaper which clamis that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter - say which point in the article you agree with - explain ways in which your town centre in different from most other town centres. - offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, Recently, I read a news article which is published by Eenadu paper the

last

Sunday, explaining Dammam city town centre's development. Dammam citizens are happy with your article. I totally agree with your post that mentioned shopping areas are built in enormous space areas. But, it was developed within a 10km radius of the town centre.

On the other hand

, I do not agree with you that all buildings were very similar.

For instance

, I noticed that the West Avenue mall was built in shape in Daimond and they allowed parking outside of the mall. Which is not similar to other malls.

Additionally

, the Red sea mall was built with additional buildings for car parking.

This

plan

also

does not look like others. I was totally disappointed with your article with no proper information. So, I would like to invite the writer to explore my city again with me, and I can spend one day time to guide Dammam city. Please let me know your possible time and date for re-visit. Yours faithfully, Anand

Submitted by anand.gnt92 on Sat May 27 2023

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